I have a best friend, her name is Atika wahyuningtias. Atika lives in Sidorejo, Rowokangkung, Lumajang. She is a student of Junior High School 01 Yosowilangun. She is in seventh E class. She was born in Lumajang , 12 march 1999. She is twelve years old now. Atika is a tall and beautiful. She has long and black hair. She has white teeth. Her favorit drink is pineapple juice and favorit food is fried rice. Her favorit lesson is English and favorit colour is white. Her hobby is reading and her ideal is teacher
I like,because she is very helpful as a friend.
your text is long and good enough but the last sentence 'she was very helpful' actually 'she is very helpful. Keep trying,ok?
BalasHapus